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Writer's pictureDaniel Bingham

Film Plan

Act 1

Church?

E - Smoking kills. K - Sticks and stones.

Ellis and Kane approach car park.

Kane powers on ahead towards a car.

He leans head first into a bin and emerges with a brown envelope.

He breaks the seal and takes a set of keys out.

They debate who gets the keys.

Kane relents and gives them to Ellis who gets into the driver's seat.

They drive off.

Kane pulls some paper out of the envelope and reads information about Sonny- their next

target.

Now in a remote village, Kane stands by the car smoking.

Ellis comes out of a pub with information about Sonny.

Kane throws his cigarette butt on the ground.

They set off in their own directions looking for him.

Ellis traveling montage.


Act 2

Ellis comes to a river.

In the distance, Sonny is fetching water from the river.

Ellis pulls his gun out.

He tries to sneak up on Sonny.

Sonny glances over quickly, focused on what he’s doing.

Sonny calls over “Careful on those rocks. It’s slippy.”

Ellis, freezes awkwardly; unsure what to do now he’s been noticed. “Thank you…”

Sonny looks up again, properly, noticing the gun.

Fearful, Sonny turns to run.

Ellis tries to run after him, raising his gun to aim.

He slips on the rocks, twisting his ankle, and falls to the ground, banging his head.

He tries to stagger to his feets again, but falls to the ground again, losing consciousness.

Blackout.


Act 3

Ellis wakes up.

Convict has tended to his wounds

Explain convict’s crime

Humanise him

Sonny points gun? Realises what he’s doing and gets rid of it

Fiddles with watch. Ellis asks him about it

Morality/ forgiveness/ religion

S - How did you find me all the way out here in the hills? E - You’d be surprised.

Where am I? Looks around camp

You were going to kill me! Points gun.

Sonny’s backstory

Morality/ forgiveness/ religion. Do you believe in God?

Ellis deciding to let Sonny go

Fiddles with watch. Ellis asks him about it

Sonny offers Ellis water/food

Ellis hinting at his job. Sonny doesn’t even know why people are after him. How long he’s been

doing it for.

What do you believe in?

What do you mean?

God?

Did he mean to kill them? Plays it over and over again. He honestly doesn’t know.

You’ve gotta be the most unlucky guy in the world


Act 4

Sonny and Ellis go to part ways, but Ellis can barely walk on his injured ankle.

Sonny helps him walk, acting as a support for him to lean on.

They head back in the direction of the car.

Montage.

Ellis notices a still smoking cigarette butt lying on the ground.

BANG! Suddenly Sonny gets hit by a bullet, falling to the ground instantly.

Ellis loses his balance and falls too.

Ellis pulls his gun and frantically scans around him to see where the shot came from.

BANG! Ellis is hit.

Ellis drops the gun.

Kane walks towards them.

Kane sticks his boot on Sonny’s throat and shoots him in the back of the throat.

Kane moves on to Ellis and says something like (but not) “You’ve gone soft.”

Ellis is too weak to retaliate.

Kane takes the car keys from him.

Kane picks up Sonny’s body, slinging it over his shoulders.

Kane walks off, leaving Ellis alone.

Ellis breathes his last breaths and dies.

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The End

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