- Rewritten Kane’s scenes
- New opening (Although not completely happy)
- Main scene with Ellis and Sonny. We’ve gone away and almost finished writing a new structure for that. So we should have a new scene done soon
- However, we are well over page limit. We will need to cut the opening down. There was suggestion that we could just cut the opening in the city before they get to the countryside, but that would cut some pretty important stuff between Ellis and Kane
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